Choose activities by stage

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Begin exploring the stages of thinking by clicking the images below.

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Stages

Choose a stage based on observation

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Teachers: Use this guide to help you determine what stage of thinking would be most beneficial to your students.

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If you notice… Then leverage activities from this stage of thinking:
• Inaccurate facts or descriptions of source materials
• A disconnect between the assignment goal and the student’s work
• Failure to comply with a specified format
• Misuse of key terminology or core ideas Understand
• Overuse or overreliance on the ideas or words of other people’s works
• Inability to make analogies or relate one idea to that of others
• A disconnect between the student’s written submission and their personal goals
• Missing data or information or ideas that one would expect based on previous learning or recent experience Know Things
• Regurgitated solutions or overly typical responses to a problem
• A lack of originality in the written assignment, despite accurate or thoughtful ideas
• Weak associations between ideas Mind Wander
• Inability to identify and/or use important ideas from source materials
• Difficulty in making a personal connection to the writing
• Tendency to skip over feedback or avoid making changes based on feedback
• Jumps between one idea to another with no explicit connections Reflect
• Illogical leaps between ideas or concepts
• Disjointed writing or failure to see similarities and differences between parts of the written product
• Difficulty in describing the relationship between multiple ideas Map & Connect
• Trailing away from main point or main objective
• Unorganized approach to sharing what are otherwise sound and related ideas
• A struggle to convey the order and hierarchy of the written work
• A weak opening and/or closing of ideas Outline
• Written work that appears rushed or completed in one sitting
• Missed deadlines and/or stressing about deadlines
• A missing connection between the assignment and what the student hopes to achieve with it Plan
• Missed opportunities to include key voices/authors on the topic
• A mixture of good and questionable sources of information
• Leaning on sources expressing only similar viewpoints to that of the author
• Missing or mistaken factual material or inaccuracies in the use of domain-specific vocabulary or schema Research
• Difficulty in conveying thoughts or ideas in written form despite clear communication in other modalities
• An avoidance of writing, or preference to share out in other ways Draft
• Trouble with tone or messaging of the written ideas
• An overreliance on self-confirming evidence
• Difficulty in separating main ideas from supporting details
• Desire to please the teacher; writing for the teacher’s goals Peer Exchange
• Revisions to the written work are minimal to none
• Disengagement from the project after receiving feedback
• A difference in reactions to feedback based on modality or who gives the feedback
• Limiting response to feedback to correcting only marked errors and not finding the same or similar errors elsewhere
• Limiting responses in feedback to only positive, “face-saving” feedback Feedback & Feedforward
• A lot of unnecessary repetition or wordiness
• Organizational issues
• Evidence problems
• Inappropriate transitions problems or gaps in transitions
• Logical fallacies
• Poor word choice or word choice inappropriate to audience or task
• Inappropriate tone
• Gaps in connecting the pieces (details) to the larger ideas (the whole) Edit
• Haphazard revisions after feedback, or missed opportunities to step back and see how all the pieces go back together
• Missing details or gaps in the connections across the main ideas
• Writing that trails away from the point of the assignment or the student’s goals Revise
• Poor word choice, misspellings, and many grammatical errors Proofread
• A lack of unique voice in the student’s writing
• The final grade is the student’s main reason for celebration (or feelings of failure)
• Unmet potential for the written work to be shared beyond the assignment submission Complete & Commence

Table source: Tokuhama-Espinosa, T., Nazareno, J. R., & Rappleye, C. (2024). Writing, Thinking, and the Brain: How Neuroscience Can Improve Writing Instruction. Teachers College Press. 1234 Amsterdam Avenue, New York, NY 10027.